Do you like my new poem?

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Under the railing


I watch for the robin


To tell me that Spring


Is coming again





I wait for the sunshine


And blooming of clover


Moistening earth


As the garden begins





I see the young sprouting


And creeping moss greening


Hollyhock reaches,


Up for the sky





Soon I will be there


Among the Spring flowers


As I slowly change


To a pink butterfly





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Do you like my new poem?
Very good cadence, easy to read and enjoyable.
Reply:Whoa! Rythmn is excellent, end ryhme on every other stanza caught me off guard...well thought out and presented. Resolution in the last stanza is at once sad and soothing. GREAT...what else can I say....except...





Good Morning!
Reply:Very good
Reply:sweet and springy...
Reply:Nice. thanks.
Reply:I love it!
Reply:There's that longing for Spring again....Then I turn and look out the window and it seems like it will never come!


My new term for shoveling snow is "Winter gardening!"


Very good poem, as usual! :-)
Reply:This poem is great i must confess... I can also write poems but not as good as anyones on here. Nice job keep it up!
Reply:i like itt=]
Reply:Good one. Thank you for sharing. Love, honey
Reply:I thought it was beautiful! Well done. Strangely enough it had a very 'refreshing' feel to reading it. I could picture a beautiful blue skied day. You must have talent! Please don't stop writing - I'd love to read more of your poetry!
Reply:It's nice
Reply:My favorite so far for today. Can't wait for spring. I always feel I will live again for another year once I make it through the winter.
Reply:Yes. Its quite invigorating reading that with the sun shining through the window.
Reply:Very Nice....!!
Reply:Great!!! writings,, Congrats!!!
Reply:Now this one I like. It is too well written and I like the thought of spring flowers, butterflies and all.